Craig Jackson's Discussions (10)

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"Please understand that my advice is so so at best, I'm a creative writing student bu…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 25, 2014 to Paradise of Restoration

6 Nov 25, 2014
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"I really liked this, I think "mania" is a bit off for the last word in the final ima…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to The black fear

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"I really liked it but I think you were a little to rhyme heavy and it hurt the rhyth…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to Humble Brevity

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"that was awesome. I wish I could critique this but I know nothing about free verse."

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to The War on Terror

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"I liked the first half, but then I think the rhythem of the poem hit a bump in the r…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to every once in awhile

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"STANZAS, excuse my all caps. Stanzas! I think this would be much better if you broke…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to Can anyone here me?

5 Sep 4, 2016
Reply by Marie Soffy Saint Fort

"I really liked the flow of the piece, though you may want to add in a stanza or elem…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to Paradise of Restoration

6 Nov 25, 2014
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"I like it, but you may want a better opening line, that's a huge part of poetic appe…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to I want to hit the release button of my head

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"I'm eagerly awaiting part 3.  Though I don't know why more people haven't responded…"

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to Writing Advice & Contest Tips: Part 2

1 Nov 24, 2014
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"I think it needs a better flow but a very cute poem."

Craig Jackson replied Nov 24, 2014 to I am 20 years old n I love to write poems bt I am confuse how to post my poem

2 Nov 24, 2014
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