We all long to recapture a bird long its feather
A wish to treasure a match of get together
To escape through dreams along life's mistakes
Humble brevity a toss of its minute menagerie
We look through its timeless extremities;
Let us learn to take one day at a time
An intervention based solely on the wind
We each must pray just to make it today
We each must learn to turn the television off
Shattered fragments left out in desolation
Awake the new day sun we will run
The innocent are punished & the guilty go free
Nice to visit what it will say on my homily
Shaped to grow then to know all that agrees.
I really liked it but I think you were a little to rhyme heavy and it hurt the rhythm of the piece. Also you may want to use stanzas to emphasis your points, the absence of text can give the reader an important split second to reflect on the context.