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"Please understand that my advice is so so at best, I'm a creative writing student but I'm no expert. There's an argument to be made that your poem has plenty of substance but it isn't made apparent until the 4th stanza when you…"
"I really liked it but I think you were a little to rhyme heavy and it hurt the rhythm of the piece. Also you may want to use stanzas to emphasis your points, the absence of text can give the reader an important split second to reflect on the…"
"STANZAS, excuse my all caps. Stanzas! I think this would be much better if you broke it into lines of poetry so that when its read we could prioritize the inflection of your statements. Though I respect a good rant, this needs to be broken down and…"
"I really liked the flow of the piece, though you may want to add in a stanza or element that shows a contrast between what the ideal is and how fortunate we are to have these things. I say that because by itself this is poem pretty good, but it…"
"I like it, but you may want a better opening line, that's a huge part of poetic appeal to an audience. And really with the descriptions you give, you may want to add a few more lines and break this into stanzas so that the reader can follow…"
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