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Jan 9, 2016
princess left a comment for Craig Jackson
"Hi,My name is Princcessa. a young Girl,I got attracted and impressed when i read through your profile, iwill like to know you. if interested i will like you write letters to myprivate email box( princcessaffin@hotmail.com)so i can send you my…"
Jan 7, 2016
Craig Jackson replied to Victor Otuya's discussion Paradise of Restoration
"Please understand that my advice is so so at best, I'm a creative writing student but I'm no expert. There's an argument to be made that your poem has plenty of substance but it isn't made apparent until the 4th stanza when you…"
Nov 25, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to sayfaldeen mohammad mahasneh's discussion The black fear
"I really liked this, I think "mania" is a bit off for the last word in the final imagery though I see where you were going with it.  "
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to Mario William Vitale's discussion Humble Brevity
"I really liked it but I think you were a little to rhyme heavy and it hurt the rhythm of the piece. Also you may want to use stanzas to emphasis your points, the absence of text can give the reader an important split second to reflect on the…"
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to Abaddon's discussion The War on Terror
"that was awesome. I wish I could critique this but I know nothing about free verse."
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to manuel santos's discussion every once in awhile
"I liked the first half, but then I think the rhythem of the poem hit a bump in the road.  I think you could definatly believe that there's a great poem here but you'll need to polish it up some more."
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to Jennifer ward's discussion Can anyone here me?
"STANZAS, excuse my all caps. Stanzas! I think this would be much better if you broke it into lines of poetry so that when its read we could prioritize the inflection of your statements. Though I respect a good rant, this needs to be broken down and…"
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to Victor Otuya's discussion Paradise of Restoration
"I really liked the flow of the piece, though you may want to add in a stanza or element that shows a contrast between what the ideal is and how fortunate we are to have these things. I say that because by itself this is poem pretty good, but it…"
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to jonathan walker's discussion I want to hit the release button of my head
"I like it, but you may want a better opening line, that's a huge part of poetic appeal to an audience. And really with the descriptions you give, you may want to add a few more lines and break this into stanzas so that the reader can follow…"
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to MoonTownCafe.com's discussion Writing Advice & Contest Tips: Part 2
"I'm eagerly awaiting part 3.  Though I don't know why more people haven't responded to this post, I'm always looking for good advice."
Nov 24, 2014
Craig Jackson replied to Pooja Thakur's discussion I am 20 years old n I love to write poems bt I am confuse how to post my poem
"I think it needs a better flow but a very cute poem."
Nov 24, 2014
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At 10:24am on January 7, 2016, princess said…

Hi,
My name is Princcessa. a young Girl,
I got attracted and impressed when i read through your profile, i
will like to know you. if interested i will like you write letters to my
private email box
( princcessaffin@hotmail.com)
so i can send you my pictures and tell you more about myself.
thank you much for your understanding

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